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Proposed Collection; Comment Request- Facts included
- The notice states it is in compliance with the Paperwork Reduction Act of 1995.
- The notice is issued by the Employer Support for the Guard and Reserve (ESGR).
- The ESGR announces a proposed public information collection.
- The ESGR seeks public comment on whether the proposed collection is necessary for the proper performance of the agency’s functions.
- The ESGR seeks comment on the practical utility of the information, the accuracy of the agency’s burden estimate, ways to enhance quality, utility, and clarity, and ways to minimize burden through automated techniques or other information technology.
- Sourcing
- High – the content appears to be an official ESGR notice, directly quoting the agency’s own language.
- Framing
- The document is a factual notice and request for comment; it contains no opinion, only a description of the proposed action and a solicitation for public input.
- Omissions
- The notice does not specify what specific information will be collected, who the respondents are, the estimated burden in hours or cost, the deadline for comments, or how the collected information will be used by ESGR.
- Rhetorical notes (3)
- Formal/legal language · Call to action · Emphasis on burden reduction